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Are you using the magic fundraising word?

Magic fundraising?

Are you using the magic fundraising word?

Wait, fundraising magic?

You’ve heard it before: a magic word that will transform your fundraising.

The word is YOU.

So you dutifully make sure that word is everywhere.

But maybe it doesn’t do as much magic as you’d expected.

You is magic, but there’s more to it than that.

Donor-focused writing matters

Of course, it does. No one is that fascinated by your organization. (Sorry.)

We will always be fascinated by ourselves, however.

Our eyes go right to the word you – because it signals to us that what we’re reading might concern us.

“Pay attention!” it says.

But we’re not easily fooled.

If all you do is sprinkle that word in your otherwise organization-focused copy, you’re not likely to hold a reader’s attention long.

Here’s why I think “you” matters

When I remind myself to use the word, it changes how I think about communicating.

Used right, it forces me to stop selling the organization’s features (“We’ve helped thousands of people! And we’re all good-looking, too!”).

Instead, I elbow the organization out of the way and make room for the donor.

When the protagonist in my little story stops being the organization and starts being the donor… then it’s natural that the word you appears often.

I’m talking to the person who matters!

“Here’s why you’ll feel great when you give.”

And “Here’s why you have the power to change a bad situation.”

“Here’s why you are generous and kind!”

That’s when you becomes meaningful.

And magic.

Photo thanks to Kaique Rocha

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  1. Michael J. Rosen says

    August 30, 2016 at 5:23 pm

    Hmmm. I thought the magic word was “Pleeeeeeease!” Just kidding. Thanks for continuing to remind folks of this simple, yet vitally important, part of fundraising.

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